Evaluation Task 7

In my preliminary task there were a few faults and things that we could have done to improve it. when we started our preliminary task our media knowledge wasnt as good as it is today, my media skills have improved impeccably, one of the key faults that is in our preliminary task is the camera work in that we used the basic shots mid shots, close ups, and one 180 degree rule. these are all basic camera shots, now we have learnt hight angle shots, shot reverse shot and low angle shots, we didnt just learn how to perform them correctly we also learnt what these shots can do to influence the audience thinking for instance a high angle shot of our victim could make the audience feel that he is vulnerable and that something could be happening to him in the next shot.    At the time that me and Will did the preliminary task we weren't all that familiar with the editing software that we had to use "Adobe Premier Elements" so when watching the video the continuity isn't perfect, where we had filmed some scenes more than once to hope to get the best results we had tried to edit them together to create the best shots possible and in doing so the shots didn't cut at the correct time so it repeated some of the words. It wasn't just the editing software that prevented us to make a film that was as well edited and filmed like "Mine Forever" is now and that is because we hadn't done as much work with the camera. But this task gave us the preparation that we needed to be able to feel confutable with filming for our films and I think the camera work in 'Mine Forever' is relatively good.

Evaluation task 4

This is a picture of one of our characterd (Jack) played by Sidney Ratcliff, Sidney represents your average 'teen' which makes the target audience around the same age and they can relate to him. 

The target audience would shop for movies online, like amazon or Ebay this is because the target audience would be around the same age as our protagonists and with teens now being more online than ever. with there being options not just on the computer because you can stream or download from other devices like Ipad's, Iphone's, and Xbox 360's the rise in synergy allows people to watch Tv Programmes on the go and this. they are more likely to download or stream from sites like ITunes, Netflix and Love Film as well as the examples above. Some Teenagers might not conform and copy what the majority of the teens do and download then they will  hmv if they want to get an actual DVD not a download or rental. The music that they listen to would be dubstep, grime and hip hop. In the film we would them wearing the same fashion that most people wear at the same time of filming like fashion would be chinos polo shirts and fashionable T-Shirts. This will make the target audience that like some the conventions of the film

This a picture of what teenagers we think will watch our film we think this as they look relatively 'normal' teenagers. they are wearing the same types of clothes that are in fashion today and that our characters would have been wearing in the film. The age of the teenagers look to be around the same as my group like me and WIll Huck and the actors in the film.

Anamatic

Storyboard anamatic

Film Treatment

(Police Interrogation Room)

Detective Davies ( Mr Thornton) is interviewing a witness to a series of murders and the witness James Smith( Sam De Almeida) is telling the detective everything that had happened to his friend, it then cuts to a clip of his friend Jack ( Sidney Ratcilff ) who is trying to find his phone and sees the ghost who is going to start killing people until he gets his beloved girlfriend back. the story starts a long time before the killings in the forrest it starts in the victorian era when he was young and from a poor background so he had to work in a coal mine his boss was horrible to him and made him work long and hard all day.One day the boss' daughter comes to see her dad and when the boy sees her he instantly falls in love, he goes to the foremans house and gives his daughter a ring that he had bought with the money he has been saving up for ages. when the foreman found out about this love affair he was furious he couldn't believe that his beautiful daughter could fall in love with a poor coal mine worker, he was so angry that he took the boy into the middle of the woods where no one would see them and he murdered him with a pick axe. The young poor boy swore that he would once again be reunited with her again, the foreman took his daughter and moved away, the ghost of the boy couldnt leave the woods where he died until he found her again.
 a group of friends go camping after they graduated as a way to celebrate they packed their bags got in the car and headed of, they  didnt have anywhere planned to go so while they were driving they found where they were and found a rural town and they thought that they would go there because it was getting late and it was close they found a place where they were going to pack and they set up camp, when night came Jack had to back to his car because he realised that he had left his phone. after a while James thought that he would go and check to see where he had got to. when he got to the car jack wasnt there so James looked around the area where the car was parked and he found his body lying there he had been killed with a pick axe James is so shocked he leaves his friend dead and runs back to the camp site where the rest of his friends where to get them to help, but when he got to the campsite all his friends had been killed aswell but he notices that one of his friends wasnt there Sam she had been taken by whoever had killed the rest of his friends, James runs for his life and tries to escape and goes to the car where jack was killed he couldnt find the keys in the car so he had to do the unthinkable and search for the keys on Jack he found them in his pocket gets into the car and drives to the nearest police station. then there is the repeat of the police scene.
we then have it go on to the girl who is missing Sam running through the woods and finding an empty house, she decides that it will be safer for her so she enters the house and goes upstairs and hides, but what she doesnt know is that the house that she is hiding in was the house that the ghosts lover lived the ghost gets angry because the girl that looks like his lover has ended up in her house the ghosts enters the house and is trying to kill Sam as he believes that killing her will be a sacrafice to bring back his beloved she runs down the stairs and falls through the floorboards on the landing she sees a young girl lying there. the body of the girl the ghost loves.